Keyshot Users

5/10

Can you tell me mistakes. Thanks for pass mark. :)

Well,you could lower the saturation a bit for a start...

2/10

Harsh critics above :)

Overall I like it. Things I'd change if it were my image:

• Fillets on the ribs on the sides of the bottle if they don't already have them, otherwise make them larger.
• Change the larger fillets on the body from traditional fillets to conic fillets to get a better blend. High end products (like perfume, and phones) make use of conics. General machined parts make use of traditional fillets.
• The lighting on the cap is a little weird. I'd try to move the lighting more behind to create a glowing effect around the cap, instead of having the lighting highlight the entire left side, and also cause those hot spots on the right side.
• The resolution is 1280 x 960, but the bottle (subject) only uses 600 x 300 of that space. It might be good to zoom or crop, but it depends on the goal.
• Is there liquid in the bottle? A bottle is seldom filled. I feel seeing a fluid level might be a good touch, but it may increase rendering time. It may be possible to add as a layer in a photo editor easier.
• I like the label, but unprotected labels are prone to wear. Many times a shallow pocket protects the label, but with a die cut label extending out to the edges, that may not be possible.
• There is some weird fuzzyness on the left side of the cap, and under the cap. Maybe not enough render passes for the shadows?
• I usually don't like ground reflections, but that's a personal preference.
• There is some odd horizontal banding in the bottle near where the lower roses are. What causes that?
• The label is great, but it has a lot of noise in the blank space for the text. Before using that image, I'd try to clean it up.
• Is the bottle shelled out? It looks like the white piece below the cap with the tube in it is interfering with the bottle, due to the banding on it.
• The bent tube is a nice touch, but it will leave a lot of product in the bottle when it is "empty".
• I like the saturation of color. This would look great as an ad in a glossy magazine.

Post the model(s) to your model page. We can all try to render it, and share our process. We're all bound to learn something from the practice, and from what other members produce.

I love harsh critics. That's where I can learn from. This model was downloaded https://grabcad.com/library/perfume-36. I didn't change any feature in model. Directly inserted in keyshot and started rendering. I agree light on cap is weird.

Can you mark me fuzziness, odd horizontal banding, label noise (it was as it is when downloaded- may be for style), hotspots, because I haven't seen them before.

Yes, bottle is shelled with liquid in it. The sticker hides it.

Thanks for the link to the bottle. I'll check it out tomorrow if I have a chance.

Here are some of the areas where the noise and banding appears in the image:

I thought that hotspot was to style. I don't know that. I will recreate and post the image again. Thanks for pin pointing.

I played with it a bit. I think it still needs some adjustment to the lighting:

The label might need editing too, "Cream of Roses" suggests a cream, whereas this is a liquid. "Water of Roses" or "Essence of Roses" may be better options.

Here's a version with an edited label to change the "Cream" to "Essence". The label colors are boosted a bit as well:

Please post feedback on anything you'd change. If you have a chance, try to render it yourself.

The URL above did not work for me, so try here for the 3D models:

Grabcad model

Perfume

SOLIDWORKS 2015 stl , step , sldprt

Wow, I love this renders. Did you use photoshop to edit cream to essence.

Yes.

I found the label online, but there was also a "transparent" version of it which I used. I filled in the middle with a solid color, then recreated the text. That got rid of the noise around the text.

The font is not an exact match, but I like it. It is Footlight MT Light.

Here's a copy if anyone wants to make use of it for their rendering:

Thank you. I will render again and post here.

I think the label and the bottle just don't match very well^^

Thank you for your suggestion.