Hi my friend, yes here is a big work and it looks cool.
But I'm not sure, as I saw you did it in Solidworks, and as I correct understand your model is for rendering or visualization, if I'm right, then I recommend you start to use specialized software like Blender or 3DMax, etc. Solidworks and similar software are used to solve engineering tasks, so if you want to rise in visualization I recommend learn special ones.
Have a good day my friend!